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by srmatlock

schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. I always love Raph and Leo together and the way you wrote was awesome... I can't wait till this one is updated... April and Splinter is a new one I've read. It's interesting... Great job..
person Wolf of Light
schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update as soon as posible, please
person foxyboy
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it. o.o i want more mikey/donney slash there isnt enough of the two man. keep up the good work.
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to start by saying how wonderful your story is. However I have come across a lot of typo's the ruin the effect of the story. Mainly on the last chapter.
I totally LOVE the fact that you kept the anatomy of real turtles in the story, however with April and Splinter I found a lot lacking in that perticular part.
IE: Rat anatomy and the fact I'm sure, pointy claws would hurt. ^_~

Please keep up the wonderful work. I really love and enjoy your writings.

Whipblade
person DC
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! o0 Amazing work here, XD Keep up the good work
person 1
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person none
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the splinter one! Do one with Splinter and one of the turtles!
person Shades
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a new at at Splinter..and when you thought he was honorable!! HAH!!!!
person ShadowWalker NightCrawler
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really cute, I like it.^_^ M/Don/Donny, WHEE!
person SahdowWalker NighCrawler
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O....I love you....not like that. You have given me my first real TMNT lemon, aetweetween Leo and Raph. This chapter was way better than the other one. Manly because it was seriuos and very emotional. I could even almost feel the tension between the two, and Leo's submissineness, Raph, the way he was, I mean jus...man I'm lost for words now. *masauges temples and sighs* Keep up the good work, see ya.