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for Covered Canvas

by draconis17

person Cat
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story and think that you shuld continu writing smiles

person Mistress of Tales
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It is promising and well-written... the intro disturbs me, though.

[This particular pieces was going to be more modern art if anything, but even though it didn’t take much work to fabricate, but it made up for it in what counts, money.]

Neither a very Mikhael-ish thought or one that an artist would usually have.
person Rei
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It has good characterization, but it doesn't seem finished.