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by sss979

person Sarah
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My good god! My panties have just exploded. That was so hot. You write Raphael so well. I can imagine him being a very horny and dominant lover. I'm still fanning myself from the heat. Just awesome. More please. If you could do a Donatello, Raphael and April threesome story that would be fantastic! 😊
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome and well written... And seeing my two favorite turtles are Raph and Leo I loved it more... Great job... I hope you write more... :)
person Aerik
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story with great sexual tension. I loved it!
person Kash
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Superb piece of erotica!!!!girl,you can write!!
person Spleef
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really wonderful story, and i love it
person Stef
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I read this before but I just wanted to say I think I saw that video they were watching. I was in Florida and I was cracking up. Like you said it was practically a soft porno. Did it involve a bathtub? Great Job

-Stef
person FireOcean
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it, I love it!! That has got to be the best story I've read in awhile. I only wish I could nail down the turtles like you can. You know, I was scared of trying to write a turtle fic, but you've just inspired me! I'm gonna try my best!!
person Crawling Elf
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Impressive, Leo always choose the wild chicks, the turtlere ire in character and the detail level is awesome.

The best porn I've ever read.

schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The detail in this is incredible. I'm impressed!