rate_review Reviews

I'm really enjoying your story. I like the way you protray the characteres, specially Tom Serra... we know he is not a good guy, but we can't help liking him... your story doesn't follow the old cliché about villains and heros, and that's nice and rare to see. Sorry, I was monosylabic on my others reviews... but I didn't have much time... and I still don't... I have to finish my monograph in order to graduate, and I have a damn deadline... sometimes life sucks.
Looking forward to the nexts chapters.

First things first...Keep going with this. I enjoyed Glass Shadow, and I've glad you decide to revisit/reinvent the characters. You've got a great take on WW and I like how you've taken the present continuity (such as it is) and really give it some teeth. Veronica Cale seemed like such a vapid cliche in the comic, bnut you've done quite well with her here. Bringing in Psycho was a wise choice; that was the one thing I wanted to see in GS, a villian that could break WW at her core, in really interesting ways. I also like the way you strike a balance between the plot, action and sex (can't ever get enough of these). Another thing I like is the creative ways WW is taken down, particularly in this series, well thought out and quite plausible, looking forward to Psycho's ministrations upon her. I don't know if you're planning on revisiting the WW deflowering sequence with Tom, but if you don don't use the mind control angle, I like the notion of him doing it because of his oath of fealty, rather than mental manipulation. He might not like it (as if!) but he'll do it because he has to. Just a thought. Again, ts fos for all your efforts, they are appreciated.

Nice work. Can't wait for more.

Good story. More!

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