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for Waiting For You

by MysticMewtwo

person Melissa
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, wonderful story!!!!! Loved it very much :)
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, as well as the other one that is kind of the lead in for this. Could never see the turtles in this light before, but this is truly an enlightnening story. I do hope you do another one...this one warrants it!
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story! I totally love it. i hope you write more! ^,^
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, hope to read an update sometime soon. c:
person Lin
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tee-Hee.......... I'm enjoying myself!!! Do continue :)
...Gotta' know what happened next!
person Rena the Reviewer
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just spent my entire afternoon reading this story and I must say that it was worth it! You have really set up an intriguing story here! It was chock full of character development, most of it geared toward Leonardo. He's my favorite character from TMNT and I am sorely disappointed in the lack of stories for him (even bad ones o.o;)...

But, you managed to get everyone in-character and explained Leo's behavior changing very well! It's quite realistic.

Please, continue this! You've really got me excited over what will happen next, and a story rarely does that to me!

--Rena
person Lin
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... please wright some more!!!! Please... I really like your work!!!!! :)
person Lin
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.............Loving it!!!!! Good story, interesting idea. Can tell you really love & respect the turtles (as do I).I really engoying the emotional "storm" in your story... & all the feelings between Leo , Raph, Don, Mike, Splinter & April! Didn't have a chance to get to know Alisa, but I'm patient (...as long as you keep wrighting). I'm wating for the next chapter!!! Thank you :0)
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you back! Writer's Block is the worst! Gets to me all the time too! Still loving this story! Poor confused, emotional Leo. We can never give him a break, can we? ;0) Can't wait for the next chapter, and don't feel bad about taking so long between updates. Happens to all of us!
person dragon85
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much!! Update please please please!!! Continue!!