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for Breathless

by Artemis1088

schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is some evil foreplay. hehehe I love it.
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good PWP

Both of them in character, well description, quite interesting the pairing development.

Quite nice fic you made, hopefully not the last.


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person phantasm
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is actually the only bm/ww fic that got them together without destroying their personalities.great job!
person Nancy Brown
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this! Lovely and hot, and all about the power games.