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for Batman Before

by Jessy8

person December
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good. its a fresh Idea that I've never read. you really should have a beta though because you contastly change the view point from first person to third person, and so it makes It very hard to grasp some ideas. but all in all it is very good. and I can't wait to read more. with that you should update soon please oh pretty please! and if you lack a beta I am willing to help. later.
person Jenn
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah! I love this story! Please update soon! I beg you!
person Zrina
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rofl, he crashed the bat computer! Further proof that windows sucks :D This is really interesting so far, can't wait to read more !!
person TJ
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is seriously great, I'm really enjoying reading it.
Thanks and update soon.
person sinheart
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is frikkin awsome!! please update again!!
person Amoral Butterfly
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lmao. Ah... To think there was a time before fast internet. Too bad Bruce didn't use the good 'ol Linux or Unix OS. Terry would've freaked out for sure over the command line function. Yes. I'm still following this fic. It happens to be one of the few that interests me enough to leave reviews these days. Can't wait to see what happens between Dick and Terry. Smile.
person Amoral Butterfly
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I've been following this fic for the past couple chapters and I must say that I really hope you continue adding chapters. Good Batman slash is hard to come by and I've been searching for some time for a slashy fic in which Terry lands in with the Bat family from the past. I'm still not clear as to what exact pairing you're setting up here, though, so I eagerly expect to find out later. Interesting plot and although you've got some really odd technical errors in your writing, I can still see your grammar improving through the chapters. Now update!
person Sologirl102
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Singsongs* You know you want to updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate! Weee! Alrighty, singsonging ends now. I'm enjoying this too much, because I'm shirking from my homework, and that's bad.
person Suishou
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, definitely interested. Uber-maniac villain, very lovely. Can't wait to see more. Great job and thanks for writing this.
person Betty
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
goodstart cont