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0_0' WOWZERS! You've got a GREAT story going thus far! Please keep up the good work and update ASAP! *-Starts mopping up small pond of drool (from reading the story).-*

Absolutely Spine tingling o__o;

Erm. I wish it hadn't ended so soon. .___. write more? Please? <3

Hey your writing is good hopefully you will update it soon and e-mail me when you update it at JTB8834@aol.com or RedDragonSTL19@yahoo.com

delightfully dark I liked what you did with your charcters. They were flawed yet touched upon a depth substance few writers try to instill in their charcters you also managed to portay batman as dark and torn as he his yet give him a humanity few try to do successfully.;but you should escalate the violence to the same level as the sex and back story what is batman without violence it's a part of his nature instilled in himself barely beneath the surface at all times it seems you get away from this alot that could give you another edge to his needs to be understood needed ,loved etc.

Nicely done! I always loved Batman Beyond best of all the animated Batmans!

Very good chapter, a bit better then the last. Once again, Lora becomes a more complete character chapter by chapter (you got the basics of psychological domination down). Should be interesting to see what role Amanda has to play. If you're expecting any criticism (constructive or otherwise) on this chapter you're not going to get it from me. I look forward to the next chap, it should be, um... interesting.

Nice, convincing (and sad) backstory for Lora. You're really painting Maximus to be a peace of shit, so it should be interesting when he makes his entrance. Terry remains, determined and understandably single minded (heh). Anyway, good chapter. I look forward to the next chapter.

Don't you dare get discouraged. I have to know how it ends! Please? I am one of those people who are never satisfied till they see things through to the end. I find your writing to be very good and well thought out. Batman Beyond doesnt have many fanfics so please conitnue. I liked the show. I have to I enjoy the whole plot a great deal, so keep it up. Remember to have fun, thats what this writing fanfics is all about.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment,

Iceheart

Good chapter. I think it should occur to Terry that between himself and his alter-ego, from Lora's perspective she's skirting a two man relationship. I hope you keep writing this, I'm enjoying it a good deal and really want to see what happens as it progresses (it's one of the few regularly updated stories I come to ADFF.N for).

Great story! Its great how you seemed to capture Terri's personality so well.