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Nice, I always wanted to see something with the Dee Dees in it. It does feel like there's more that can be added to it though. Just something to think about.

Besides the fact that this was an amazing story and piece of fanfiction literature, I feel that there could've been more to the story.

Don't ask me why, but I feel like this needs just one more chapter. I think I feel this way because Terry did one sister, but left Delia un-attended; even if her partner in crime did perform an act. Plus, I just feel that it could use a funny ending, considering whose "grand-daughters" they are...

Perhaps Max coming back and finding three exhausted and sleeping individuals in bed. Or perhaps the twins decide to mention to their Nanas exactly who they slept with... This is all just a thought, but even if you don't add anymore, this was still an amazing story and know you are a great fanfic writer. Keep up the great work.

Well the second chapter kind of seemed a little rushed to finish off what was happening in the first chapter. Plus you need to remember to explain things. Like why one sister liked pants and the other old toys, plus I didn't even know they were going to the same school as him and Max, also I didn't see why or even how they arrived when Paxton started falling apart like he was there near the end. You can't just have stuff happen for no reason so that's something to remember for the future.

So finally get to the sex scene, it wasn't bad, I was hoping for a bit more but it was decent enough. I do hope this isn't the end, I mean I want to see how things go from here. Will he get two new girlfriends in the twins, friends with benifits? Will the twins decide to ditch the joker theme and go with something new? Any way of getting Max in on the action? There is just a lot more I'd like to see from this that I think you can have some fun with.

Anything Batman Beyond is fine by me. With good Story and good sex is even better. Keep up the good work.

Hmm, nice finish, I like that Hagen is finally cured, and Paxton basically screwed himself something fierce. Though i admit I thought it would take more than two chapters to tell. Ah well, until next time, I suppose. Laters.

i'm loveing the story so far please kepp up with the good work.

Think that you could add Catwoman's and Poison Ivy's grand-daughters?

Love it!

The Dee's are sexy!

Ooh, nice opening. I was actually starting to wonder when they were gonna realize the enemy was hagen, but fortunately you got that in right at the bell! I look forward to seeing how Terry handles him(pity they never covered what happened to him the actual series). Well, until chapter 2, then. Laters.