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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i couldnt get into the black canary chapter, the idea that she doesnt have a much stronger will then a selfish princess brat and catwoman who doesnt even have the willpower to break her own kleptomania when she has the presence of mind to want 2 is laughable. and even bsides just the fact that canary has more willpower, if catwoman can outsmart maxima then canary shoudl have no problem, her beating catwoman in the past proves that shes the smarter and more resorceful. it just ruined the chapter 4 me, i cant jill off if im laughing.
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please! I love Huntress and I can't wait to read that chapter
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have only one real complaint about the list, Max Gibson is "from the future" Aka Batman Beaound(sp) so she wouldnt realy work with the list... How about Livewire? shes a kick ass charictor and It would be interesting to see how Maxima would brake her.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is prety awesome, i cant wait 4 black canary, shes the most awsome comic book girl ever! i just hope she gives maxima at least as tough a fight as catwoman, hell i think black canary shoudl beat maxima, 2. shes definitly good and smart enough 2
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I liked it. I do wish the sexual play, during the fight and after, would have been longer but that will happen as the story progresses. Two things that stand out though. What is "enjoy the FRISSON of being helpless?" And I think that Supergirl's name in the Timm universe is Kara-Zi instead of Kara-El.
High praises.
High praises.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is certainly a new and different idea. I like it. Just a few grammar errors, here and there, but nothing too much.
Just so you know, Max Gibson doesn't exist yet. She's only 16 or 17 in Batman Beyond, and that takes place 40 years later.
I'm hoping Maxima goes after Livewire and Volcana too. Livewire is obnoxious and annoying, so Maxima would LOVE to put her in her place. Judging from how Volcana is, her and Maxima would get along just fine.
Any chance of Maxima having some sort of strap-on that acts like a real dick? It gives her the same feeling as one, and even cums? I hope so. I think it would make the story more steamy.
Just so you know, Max Gibson doesn't exist yet. She's only 16 or 17 in Batman Beyond, and that takes place 40 years later.
I'm hoping Maxima goes after Livewire and Volcana too. Livewire is obnoxious and annoying, so Maxima would LOVE to put her in her place. Judging from how Volcana is, her and Maxima would get along just fine.
Any chance of Maxima having some sort of strap-on that acts like a real dick? It gives her the same feeling as one, and even cums? I hope so. I think it would make the story more steamy.
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story.
Looking forward to reading more.
Post soon.
Looking forward to reading more.
Post soon.