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December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update ASAP! I just devoured this story! This is my favorite BatFlash story!
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, it has such odd and unusual pairings (especially Nightwing/Deathstroke, but now that it's out there, it's totally hot!!) and the smut is truly superb! Your research is really showing, and the attention to fine details shows how well you know your comics and your powers; and the science sounds relatively convincing enough! XD
I think you are doing a wonderful job pulling the pairings together and the play between the characters is hot. i never thought I would think of J'on as sexy until you had him and Flash making out on the bed and my brain melted at the thought of his hunky green form! hahaha. My favourite part so far was the double-penetration with Slade and Flash, the way you described it, that whole scene, was enough to have me squirming and slack-jawed in my seat. Fantastic!!
I think you are doing a wonderful job pulling the pairings together and the play between the characters is hot. i never thought I would think of J'on as sexy until you had him and Flash making out on the bed and my brain melted at the thought of his hunky green form! hahaha. My favourite part so far was the double-penetration with Slade and Flash, the way you described it, that whole scene, was enough to have me squirming and slack-jawed in my seat. Fantastic!!
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April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really hope you continue this soon, I love it! Definitely on my favorites list.
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great plot and writing style! It's so cute that Batman actually gets angry over Flash's night with other people because it shows he cares =). Hope you'll continue the story soon!
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I like how Batman and Flash's relatonship is progressing, and look forward to reading more soon :)
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November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm really liking this story! Keep it up, please! Things might be moving a little fast, but what's not fast when it comes to Flash? :) I think things are progressing well, but I'd loooooove to see more Batman/Flash!!! SOON!
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe nice I went to review this and had to laugh when it said "review not fast enough" I was like "dude you calling me slow!...bitch." But thak you for writing this wonderful bit of fiction and I look forward to your next chapter! Ok and here's my little snippet.
Both men stopped and looked down between them as the controller vibrated against them. There was a short pause, in which Wally screamed.
"Hit the button again Dick! Aaaah god it feels so good when you hit it!"
Back in the batcave, Bruce dropped the microscope slide he was holding,and turned away from the camera feed, developing a very severe twitch under one eye. He silently payed he hadn't just had a stroke.
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So what do you think? good not so good? Ah well seeya next chapter hopefully!
Both men stopped and looked down between them as the controller vibrated against them. There was a short pause, in which Wally screamed.
"Hit the button again Dick! Aaaah god it feels so good when you hit it!"
Back in the batcave, Bruce dropped the microscope slide he was holding,and turned away from the camera feed, developing a very severe twitch under one eye. He silently payed he hadn't just had a stroke.
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So what do you think? good not so good? Ah well seeya next chapter hopefully!