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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great story,b ut I offer one critique. Batman might possibly have the self control to stand by and not blow cover, but there is no way Diana would stand around while sombody was killed. The fight would have been sparked off then and there in chapter 4.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the story, but is there a chapter missing from it? diana and bruce refer to events that i can't remember reading about. but other than that i like your story a lot. keep it up!