rate_review Reviews

This started out great. Really it did. but honestly, you lost me right at the time Bruce Wayne, hard bruce wayne used the word "Fuck" causually. The characterization was shot to hell after that.

Dude, wtf? That was no P/w/P... more than half the story was without porn! Whatever... 's still good!

That was really quite good. Do you really think that you wrote those two out of character? I sure as hell didn't. If Bruce and Diana were in any sort of relationship, I'm pretty sure this would be how it went down. Sure, a few of the comments weren't something Bruce would say, but really, when it came down to it, your story fits right into JL. Great job.

Disturbing.

Diana's going to have a massive yeast infection from him going back and forth from anal to vaginal.