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for Mistakes happen

by Malcore

person brad
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
person Anonymous Flamer
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Tigro
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Blaze W.
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story man. I can't wait for your next one.
person capcomfreak4life
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! that was a little harsh for BB. i' freak out too if some sex-crazed sorceress spellcast my genitals. though there may be a bright side to that (for the while). YOU ROCK!!!
person General Grievous
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, and very original, Only one complaint with the whole thing though, The African-American Member of the Hive Five, the one you call "Specs", His name is "See-more" , thats been aggrevating me for a while
person capcomfreak4life
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no. oh no. oh no he didn't. i know he didn't do what i think he did. tell me he didn't do i i think he did. you made BB... BG so hot, beastboyfan/yami_joeys_dog.
you know YOU NEVER DID MENTION WHAT HAPPENED WITH HIS/HER hair. i never knew if it stayed short and green or turned long and yellow. damn you, man! and damn hive!!! i should write a revenge-fic for this. one of my biggest, meanest OCs or OFCs takin' him down.

*cries in sheer agony* BEASTBOY RECENTLY BECAME MY FAVORITE TITAN!!!! *cries out loud*
person Lysander
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have you forgot something? No Catgirl would be completed without skin-tight black outfit, a cat mask, stilettos, and a long whip! If the new-look Starfire is going to kick her sister, make the Titans showing her respects, and send the HIVE running, she need those tools.

Whip is easy. The outfit, try cutting it up from those spare kevlar armor Batman wear. Let Robin make some arrangement with contractors who made the original Batsuit, tell them it's female model with Starfire's measurement attached.

The best of all, let Starfire beat the HIVE without firing a single starbolt, just use those new toys.

The next morning, get ready for a swarm of reporters coming for the brand new Catgirl!
person lainofthewired
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, but damn, you need a beta reader to correct your grammar. You should try to get one...