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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEY ,A CHANGLING IS A PERSON THAT CAN TURN INTO ANIMALS ,AND ALSO MAN I GIVE THE STORY A FREAK'N 1000,OOOO,0000
,0000 ,0000 TO A BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG 10!!!!
,0000 ,0000 TO A BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG 10!!!!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF y did you end it for real it was good! and i havent wrote a lemon yet lol just some other crap i got dis story Painful reminder if u wanna look but yo i literally laughed out loud when you said beast boy drooled more than mad mods hypno screen thingys
good job :)
good job :)
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i no im stalking you lol BUT this has been bothering me WTF IS A CHANGELING??? is that really what beast boy is????
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
add more i like it
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though I'm not really a Terra fan I still liked this.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOAR DAMNIT! DO I HAVE TO LOCK YOU IN MY CLOSET TO MAKE YOU WRITE?!?!?!?!? I SAID WRITE MOAR!!!!!! IMMEDIATLY IF NOT SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 out of 10.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty godd but it could have been more discriptive but on a scale of 1-10 i would give it an 8.5 good shit.
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Two things to think about for a future; a little more detail would have been nice, and it could have been a bit longer. Other then that, nice work.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good but you should have them both have his kid
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems that the others hit the short nail on the head, so here's my two cents on a different topic. Detail; it is your freind, feel free to use it. Describing the enviroment, thier mindsets, stuff like that will do two things; first) it helps make a better visual, and second) it adds that precious length. A depth of detail makes up for pages of filler anyway. In fact with the right details your story can be shorter, but filling. Email me if you continue writing and need help chewin stuff...I mean...revising stories before they hit the stands.
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