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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
REvier for Chap 4: That has got to be the most awkward situation ever to exist, i love this story it gets me go fucking hot, keep writing
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...wow
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You my friend, have far too many interesting stories for me to read. Whenever I come to finish one story, I see another one that I am dying to read. Dude, I'm so jealous of your creativity, you rock.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
speling and a few words left out here and there...
other than that very very very good.
VERY GOOD!
Damn Good!
Good for you
good for me.
Fogu-s_Tofu thanks you
will finish later
& review again
other than that very very very good.
VERY GOOD!
Damn Good!
Good for you
good for me.
Fogu-s_Tofu thanks you
will finish later
& review again
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snickering after reading chap 5*
So I guess Slade really does own Robin's ass now Mwahahahaha
Oh god that was classy. I gotta go now My asswipe non identical twin Brother want's the comp he's more perverted than anything
Likled it so far anyways
So I guess Slade really does own Robin's ass now Mwahahahaha
Oh god that was classy. I gotta go now My asswipe non identical twin Brother want's the comp he's more perverted than anything
Likled it so far anyways
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gives the Author Coffee!*
Oh MAN that fouth chapter was Fucking Tight!
Damn I was excited reading that Mwahahahahaha
I wonder if Star will ask Ftreind Cyborg why Raven was on BB'S Tedding tackle
*Cyborg sweatdrops*CY: To stop Rae from falling?
*Maxwell Smart*
Max: Would you believe he was Giving Raven the Venusian mind meld?
Oh MAN that fouth chapter was Fucking Tight!
Damn I was excited reading that Mwahahahahaha
I wonder if Star will ask Ftreind Cyborg why Raven was on BB'S Tedding tackle
*Cyborg sweatdrops*CY: To stop Rae from falling?
*Maxwell Smart*
Max: Would you believe he was Giving Raven the Venusian mind meld?
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I thought it was pretty hot, very hot actually... good descriptions too, made me feel very invovled... and you should work on getting chapter four up pretty soon.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please get the next chapter done soon, I can't wait to see it.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read the next chapter. I find this to be a wonderful story. If you need someone to prof read the next chapter send it to me.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Im a raexbb fan, but Im real glad to see how there can be another character in the mix and still acknowleging theres something 'tween him and her.