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AWSOME STORY! I cant wait to see wha thappeens next ^^

This fic is looking good so far. I love the whole 'name' idea, very creative. And Slade's being pretty evil, poor Robin. Please update soon, I can't wait to know what else you have in store for the fic! ^_______^ *rubs hands together*

This is insanely good. And the characterization of Slade is anything if not perfect... the sense of him toying with Robin, but still very much wanting him.

And perhaps Robin wants it too...

If you do continue this, I will cry. For serious.

I very much enjoy this story. You are doing a great job with the AU. And, even though it's an alternate universt stt still feels like it isn't. Does that make sense? ^__^

I love how you're writing Slade. You have his creepy, perverted sexiness down perfectly. Brava. And the school is delightfully creepy. I can't wait to read more of this; it's very good and very compelling. Keep going with the Raven/Starfire angle- it's cute.

Truthfully I've only seen it once (even though I bt a t a copy) and all I can mbermber is "Dude, how fucked up is this? They turned into *cars*."

And this was so *good*. All the sexual tension! Again, your characterization is so on the mark. Especially Slade this time around, playing with his little birdy and then letting Robin go so he can draw it out. And the Raven/Starfire was cool, if a bit sudden.

And now Robin no longer remembers his name is Richard Grayson. Does he remember his other nickname is Dick? Because that'd be kinda confusing if he did, since Dick is the universal shortening of Richard (though my brother would slap me upside the head if I called him that).

Awesome! I'm glad you update fast, becuase this is so good!

PS: You mentioned Slade making a good phone harasser? Go here for a soundboard that is made by a guy that sounds like Slade. http://www.ebaumsworld.com/phonebooth.html

Continue soon!

This is actually really good! Continue! And the whole name thing is from Spirited Away, isnt it? This is very interesting.

ooh! ooh! i just love what you've written so far! and it's an answer to my challenge! i must dance and be insanely happy! *dances and is insane* this is wonderfully written and it sent shivers down my spine in places. . . a hard thing to do, indeed. i like the way you characterized everybody and the premise is sublime. . . yay! i must read more! post soon. ja ne!

Again, I'm left in a suspenseful wait as I wo, if, if only to myself, how the face-to-face confrontation will happen. And the phone call? Genius. *giggles at the 'Cock Robin' line*

Then there's the characterization. I'd personally be freaked out if any of this happened to me, but Dick's just angry and frustrated about it. And Slade's all calculation and admiring of the underage pretty boy while staying firmly in the shadows while leaving disturbing poetry for said pretty boy.

No, this is definitely unlike any Utena I've watched and read.

That is REALLY good! I would like to read more ^_^!