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for Betrayal: The Alternate Ending

by Kingcobra

person Samurai
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should keep Betrayal: The Alternate Ending going. It starts to get extremely interesting at the end of the first chapter.
person Robin Holmes
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very well done. I would have reacted the same way, had I been in BB's shoes.
person nos482
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
think this is a good story, and very interesting if you do continue this i'll enjoy it,
person animeking
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is the way I would have preferred it to end as well. This is how it should have gone. Things would've been so much better for her, & all the Titans.
person jaemy
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good! :)
person someone u dont know
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o snap! thats how i would always wanted it would turn out, but NO! beast boy had to fuk it up by saying "slade was right, u have no friends"......sorry fer the rant, but thats how i feel. i like where this is going and i hope ukeep it up!
person gdgd
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey continue this story i want to see what the titans do to her
person BC1
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.