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Hey-

Great work, as usual. I really like your descriptions, and I'm liking it. Keep up the good work!

-Jin

I've been relentless in my reviews, you however do not fall 'under the gun' of my scrutiny. The way that you are leading this story is wonderful. I'm enjoying how, even though many of us know the characters, you're leading us into character development so we can get a better feel of what is to come. You've also demonstrated a great talent for keeping the characters in context, even though they are in the process of expanding their relatiips.ips. I'm growing anxious for the next chapters. One thing I will suggest, however, is that you look into finding an unbiased Beta Reader if you don't already have one. Not that you're not doing fine yourself, I g I give that tidbit of advice to everyone, as it's always good to have a second opinion on matters of work that could fall under heavy flaming and criticism. You have acquired an appreciative fan. The real obstacle to come is how well you handle the romance. I guess we'll all have to wait and see. Kudos.

I absolutely love it. I can't wait to read more.

why do you keep misspelling cyborg?

I loved it ANOTHER CHAPTA PLEASE

Hey, nice fic girly. Don't know what a Teen Titan is though. ^.^* You can explain it to me later. Keep it up!

A great story. I really like your idea for BB's 'evolution.' You should continue with this and post again soon. I'm going through a Teen Titan fanatic stage at the moment, so I'll keep an eye out for new posts. Keep up the exelent work! (Oh, if you have the need for a beta reader, please e-mail me at admantiusrowan@yahoo.com!)

I'm interested. Continue!

I like it, update soon!

So far I like your story. I'm curious to see what will unfold as the story progresses. I hope you update soon!