rate_review Reviews

Oh my god.

Besides the obvious grammar and spelling errors(there's tons) the story was TERRIBLE!

TORTURE ROCKS!!! GIMME MORE!
i feel sorry for raven being yanked into that. just what is it that makes so much of us want raven and not starfire. is it her revealing clothes, her ultra-cool pwers, or is it that starfire's always so happy it scares us off?!

Ok, I don't have a problem with a non BB/Rae supporter because everyone has their own tastes, but I have a slight problem with the chapter. Did you have to make BB be so desperate as to practically rape Raven in her sleep? Grr... you mad me mad as a BB fan, not as a BB/Rae fan.

Other than that unfortunate incedent at the end, it was a good chapter. Jira's freinds should mind their own business... or get their own girlfriends. I think that it's intereresting that there is a Tamaranian in their group. Maybe he and Star should meet and talk. Update soon!

OMG! YOU'RE SO MEAN! This story is awesome, and cliffhangers are mean. Please update soon!

That was a pretty good lemon, much better than any lemon's I've ever written!

mr. barron, your work was very commendable i must say.
SCREW THAT, IT WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME!

a teaspoon of darkness, a pint of hate, a cup of shades, and a dab of electricity to 'charge' things up
these are but a few of the ingredients that make this story beautiful
keep stirring

hmmm...
vampire lesbians, you're insane homey
you're awesome, write that!

damn, i get crazy off many things and start to laugh at random times with NO reason whatsoever, but damn!
...again, shit, that list of teas nearly got me as well! this is gonna be good

Pretty good chapter, but you realize at one point, it starts the entire chapter before it. Was that supposed to be a joke because of LSD tea, or was it a mistake? Either way, i'll keep reading as long as you keep writing. But yea, thats my input.