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for When Two Became One

by RyokoPorter

person CT
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But you must make a sequel! There aren't enough RobRae as it is!!!!!!!! *gets on her knees and begs* Please!!!!!!!!
person Pentacost257
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story, great characterisation and writing, very interesting premise. Please do a sequel, I'm more than curiouse to see what occurs next.
person silence1111
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have a good story here, and a squel will only make it better. keep writing you pretty good.
person Iceheart111
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write a sequel! I'll be good and write a review I promise! I loved the way it played out, mainly because I love the Rob/Rae pairing, and personally believe it makes the most sense. Having Robin become Nightwing through this was perfect, the icing on the cake. I believe it is one of my favorite stories concerning the two thus far. Mind you, I think the lack of sex may put alot of people off. I have no problem with it being the way it is. Continue please even if people don't review, because I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to more of your work.

The Demon God Iceheart Salutes YOU!
person Fae
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am a huge Raven/Robin fan. I just finished your story and had to say that i liked it. No offense but i wouldn't read a sequel if it was about Raven's siblings. One thing I have to say is that I loved the part about Raven sharing beds with everyone to avoid being alone. the fact that Robin kept her visits to himself was also very well done.
person Scarlet
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was unexpected, but I like it and I can?t wait for the next chapter.
person Shmee
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I really do. Too bad it is going to be three chapters long, but it is up to you. No pressure.

-Shmee
person RaeRob
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I am hooked up! Please update soon!
person CT
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic. :P Update soon!
person NightRobin
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good. hope u update soon.