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for Becoming an Adult

by YamisAkuchan

person Scorpia
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story.
What happens next? T_T
person lonerwolf
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a good fic. I hope you add more soon.
person BeastBoy
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How long untill the next Chapter, do you think?
person Jade
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it~! its sooo kawii! plz try to finish it ASAP
person Loner
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this is one of the best Titans yet I hope you write more soon the suspense is killing me.
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn and I thought that metalic prick was dead too!
Ther suspense is tightening likened unto a rusty vice indeed.
person nat
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey when are we going to see another chapter? you have a preaty good story going here.
person zrofyre
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I think your story is totally awesome! The plot is so intriguing to me. My vote is for number 2, a straight forward happy ending! good luck!
person milenkoschild
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
twist it enough to put dante off his lunch.
person Tigro
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi,
great story so far 8o)
I really enjoy mind bendind plot twists, so for me that would the the way to go
also, if you acept sugestions I would like something in the terms of old space operas, earth is more human and better, I mean, in that final test bb just lost because some reason people on earth would totally disagree, and so Rae and the titans would go totally against and decide it on thier own, but I guess you probably have and even better ending than that, so "follow your hearth" it has showed to lead you in the right way so far 8o)