rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this. I see a lot of similarities between this story and To Be With You. I'm only on chapter 11 of To Be With You, but it already goes a lot farther than this one. One thing I notice in this one is that Raven is more likable in the beginning. In the other story she had to grow on me again. I already liked the idea of BB and Rae being together, but she was just so...hmm, whats the word? Calculating. How everything had to be perfect before she could act. I always admire people who act prematurely. People who think that the perfect moment will never come because perfect is so far off, and just act on their emotions. Raven's emotions have a wierd twist, but I still would like to read a story in which she jumps first without looking, and picks herself back up because someone is there for her. That person being Garfield of course. One thing I keep coming across in stories is how they always have to keep it a secret, and are treated like 12 year olds when it becomes known, I was happy that your other one was the reverse. I really loved everything about this, except how Raven confessed. Her confession was too quick, like I had to go back and make sure it really happened and I didn't imagine it. I really like your writings, and look forward to reading your other stories. They make my days better.

That was cool, creepy, and well written. good job

good story.....luved it!!!! u should write more, k? pease do!!!!!!!!

Woah, slightlly dark indeed, I wonder whom the figure was in BB's Dream was though.
And BB vbiting Starfire, true ise is less guarded but I dunno I always wanted to put the 'Bite' on Rae myself ..(Bad Brian behave!)