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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the most coolest and funnies fic that ive read on my entire life was so cool make more of this mini series dont forget the 6 years old sex scenes
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't end the mini raven series yet! i need more. you rule!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
may I humbly request more? but leave her trapped in mini form.... take away the transforming again....its too odd to give her those powers to go back and forth....its like goku choosing to fight ss3 vegeta in his normal form.... why do it? you always take the stronger form whenever you can...wellI said my bit...Keep up the good work
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see a follow up to this, but with a focus on Ravens relationship with Beastboy, and the other Titans. Also, I would have liked to see more on Starfires pseudo-mother relationship with Raven in mini-form, perhaps with some disipline coming from her.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe3 nice... I have been a fan since street magic and you never disappoint may I suggest getting a beta though? you typo a lot. other than that its a great story.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, keep up the good work Gary. Sorry I didnt get to talk to you when you posted this, I can't wait for the next chapter, I'll talk to you soon!
~Yawgy
~Yawgy
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
S- for superb!
E- for enticing plot-use, event-timing and awesome effects!
X- for... duh. x-tasy (ecstasy) this story's HOT! i'm getting a little hyped on the possibilities!
E- for enticing plot-use, event-timing and awesome effects!
X- for... duh. x-tasy (ecstasy) this story's HOT! i'm getting a little hyped on the possibilities!
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwessssssssssssssssssssome!
however you might want to properly read your stories through to minimize your spelling errors.
next time we talk i'll tell you if cyborg finished his... important... business deal.
however you might want to properly read your stories through to minimize your spelling errors.
next time we talk i'll tell you if cyborg finished his... important... business deal.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice twist there, can't wait to see what happens next