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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the end of chapter 20 was amazing i mean just wow u gotta write more..still sorry bout robbie but he let his "head " think 2 much lol
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love This Story I hope you update soon!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome,totaly awsome....i love this story,its original,detailed and very well done.
(Please use spell check more;) )Please,Please,Please more updates!!
(Please use spell check more;) )Please,Please,Please more updates!!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Like Tolkein great. If there is better then I haven't read it yet. I like Ghost, he's a fine character, though a bit hard to figure out at times. Beastboy's battlerages are magnificently done. Please tell me that chapter 21 is coming out soon. this can't be the end. Congrats on killing robin. He had it coming. Kudo's also on getting Cyborg out of the picture. Raven, being my favourit e character was definitly done very well. Wren was also well done, good and sadistic. Hex and Jynx make an exellent pair and are wonderfully evil to Slade. Slade on the other hand is normally a bit more observant. All in all a great work and my advice to you is get a spellchecker. Asides from that this was good. Very good. You should give your muses a raise after this. You Win. This Wins. Exellent work altogether
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading most of your stuff and i like what i see could you be *gasp* my favorite author? maybe. but it frightens me that over 3000 people have read this and not one has reveiwed. don't let it discourage you though. even if nobody but me says it, people still like your work. please continue with your exellent work.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now, THAT is a cliffhanger! OMGWTF!!!!!11!1 Continue soon!!!
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Most unusual. Update soon.
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey I just got done reading this and I love it so far.......... Must keep updating this................ well anyway keep up with the excellent work as usual.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"unless i get to fuck the pink haird chick"? Nice...... No really i like it. Hex sounds so cool. I've only read the first chap and i might reveiw on other chaps.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love it. BB must find Rae!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And Hex must rule the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And Hex must rule the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!