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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please keep writing, im only up to chapter 4 and so far, nothing has been dissappointing. Good Job and please keep it up.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I have reviewed before, but you deserve another I really like it so far and I think I see where your heading. I'm really excited to see the outcome!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. im readin this at like 4 30 am an i couldnt stop till the end. keep it up
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue Soon! I'm hooked.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Good chapter now give us some more!
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again I love your new chapter and like the direction the story is taking.
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say this Just having read the review above my last.
What the heck are you reviewing for if it's just to bash the story. You seem to want to show good intent by saying the author writes well, but then offer no adv
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Oh wise mistress teach us, teach us where are all these fics with Raven's evil brother, please show me. I mean seriously, teach us the only thing you know how to make a complete
Idiot out of yourself by insulting a perfectly wonderful story. Then you take it one step past my toleration by insulting Final fantasy. I would understand if you insulted X-2 but not
rest. Get a life or learn how to handle your own you Callow fool.
Once again I give this story a 10/10 for originality
PS. If you want to argue foreward anmmenmments to my email.
What the heck are you reviewing for if it's just to bash the story. You seem to want to show good intent by saying the author writes well, but then offer no adv
Oh
Oh wise mistress teach us, teach us where are all these fics with Raven's evil brother, please show me. I mean seriously, teach us the only thing you know how to make a complete
Idiot out of yourself by insulting a perfectly wonderful story. Then you take it one step past my toleration by insulting Final fantasy. I would understand if you insulted X-2 but not
rest. Get a life or learn how to handle your own you Callow fool.
Once again I give this story a 10/10 for originality
PS. If you want to argue foreward anmmenmments to my email.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Raven's has an evil older brother. Now who saw THAT coming...
And let me guess, Hex is either A.) The same person aka her brother, B.) An evil cousin C.) Not related yet has something to do with her father or he's actually Trigon himself.
No offense, cause you write well and the stories kewl... but ::yawn:: this store hae has been done. To DEATH...
Same Storyline, Retold Different Version. (Like Every Final Fantasy after 6...)
And let me guess, Hex is either A.) The same person aka her brother, B.) An evil cousin C.) Not related yet has something to do with her father or he's actually Trigon himself.
No offense, cause you write well and the stories kewl... but ::yawn:: this store hae has been done. To DEATH...
Same Storyline, Retold Different Version. (Like Every Final Fantasy after 6...)
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it, continue!