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for Mating Season

by mpayn

person Sean
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more, please try to post more od this fic
person Dragona
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I can't tell if this story is good or not...
person blood
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sayian mating cycle is much longer than that ithink goku didn't stop tell he had gohan and goten
person Nevar
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not...so bad..except you messed one thing up.
It isn't males that go into heat, its the females. Its the time of the month/year whatever when they are receptive and fertile. It doesn't make any sense that the male would be in heat. Other than that, it isn't bad.