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for Mr. Mxy's Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad, Funhouse

by Jayrich

person JRAD
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first off i have to say i love this fic, you chose my favorite superman villain of all time for this, the little leprechaun guy is hilarious in this and is portrayed well in your writing, and the ending was well done, from his defeat to the foursome that ensued in the aftermath very well written altogether, i'm an instant fan
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great story dude I loved the battle against the "Autumn Soldier and the Canadian Badger" seriously perfect. I really loved the fun little facts of Tamaranians that popped up with the story. AS usual keep up the great work. You know you do alot of different show and I was wondering if you could do a Ben 10/ Charmcaster fic cause that would be awesome... also the first one around here.
person deruam
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story.More action then sex is a new change.i can't act surprise that beast boy did that.Robin did order him too much.I can't wait to see what's next.
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man your a regular "Mr. Fixit" aren't you? You put a lot "Jubilee" in your stories. Of course you could always "Hulk" out with the action but I don't think that's necessary. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more of your stories. Any chance of more "guest stars" popping up? "Koff Wol Koff ver Korr ine"
person deruam
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two thumbs up!Wonderful story.
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Serously I love it. Starfire in heat, that sounds as dangerous as Princess Man-die or vicky with Timmy Turner? Run Robin, run and then run some more! OR have a lot of viagra and condoms in your utiliy belt "hint, hint". I can't wait for the next chapter and what mxy does to the titans the next time. Keep up the great work.
person Leria
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor, poor Robin..... he's about to get raped by a horny assed Starfire..... but what are Beast Boy and Argent going to be doing while he and Starfire go at it? Hopefully, Mr. Mxylplk will have something for THEM to do as well...... or someone to do!

A great new story, and I hope to see more in the future.