rate_review Reviews

Cool! I loved the movie Underworld. I like the new twist a lot. I think that Raven and Star are going to habve some... issues with whio gets Sibuna. Hey! Maybe there can be two Sibunas and so that they won't have to fight for him. But that would be no fun, would it? ;-)

Please don't make it a three some, please don't!
Well anyways that kind of sucks with the taking
back to the past thing because I wanted Raven
and Si to have a relationship, where they acutally
have sex more than once.

good story, hope you continue it. but one thing that might annoy me, could you find some way for them to get around the sunlight thing? like raven blockign the sunlight with her powers? cause the sunlight thing is a huge handicap.

Mmm, I like, I like!! Although it sounds like Si say's
he loves Raven, but does he really? Raven is sounding
a little too young, I mean she is only sixteen in the
episodes. Anyways I do love this story, maybe you could
put Raven getting pregnant with Si's child. I know I know,
vampires can't reproduce, but could you just maybe twist
it around a little? Please update quickly again for Heart of Ice
because god, is it getting good and also update again for this
one, thank you for your time.

i like it and i think you should continue

*Squeeeeeeeee!!!* That was freakin' awesome! I loved Sibuna's character and the cameos by Walter and Victoria. And the part where Raven's eyes glowed red and she was all, "No she won't, I guaruntee it." and Si was all, 'Okay, that right there, that was hot.' I giggled like an ewok on speed. This fic was so great! You should totally continue with the scene when Raven gets to her room! HEE HEE*perverted giggle*! Just kidding...But seriously. You should. Please consider it! Much love~
Valkyrie

Lol... Chapter 8 was funny. Never wake Raven up. I'm liking Sibuna more with every chapter. He's an awesome character. I can't wait to see what he has in store for his evil, teasing mistress when she gets to the bedroom. Something kinky, perhaps? BTW, I liked the line about the kinky half-demon dominates. ;-)

And the plot thickens... Awesome chapters (5 and 6). We got to see a little more of Sibuna's powers, but still none of his past. Hopefully soon. It was awesome how he took down Cinderblock and how he pissed off Slade. Until the next chapters!

Aaaahhh, I was right, it was from Hellsing; am I good
or am I good? This is getting interesting and now you've seem
to astablish that your a fast writer. Just to tell you before this
one I read Heart of Ice, but didn't pay attention to the authors
name; it seems that it's you(Very fast updater, great). Please
get into the habbit of updating maybe everyday? (Begging with
offerings).

Hello I thought Raven was in charge here!
No offense or anyhting, but why is the vampire
befriending a stuck up little boy named Robin?
This is still very good, butplease get some
vampire/Raven connection here. I do admire the
fact that you update every night with no more than
two chapters. Cool, well please update very soon.