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June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why are there style='mso-spacerun:yes'> interspersed throughout this?
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want a gun/robin/raven/metal..the four must fuck raven,.,a lot of oral!!!!is the best..a hard sex between the three..starfire that fucking allien should die for her stupidity..she is so stupid..
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another promising story, a pity that it hasn't been updated in some time. your characters are easily likable, even if they are villains. I find my self feel sympathetic to gun and metal, they are not normal people and therefore are not entirely responsible for their actions and the bit about them not killing was genius and i found myself finding their cause to be noble after all. great writing keep it up!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey that's a good story you got here ...but what's going it seems that you haven't been updating for from the looks of it a long while?
You can't just leave a good story like this you got what it takes man keep it going !!!!
~LIZA
You can't just leave a good story like this you got what it takes man keep it going !!!!
~LIZA
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Get Cht 3 up already its been months! Good Fan Fic... hell, Great one. Hurry up with cht 3!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THis is really good but is there any chance at all that your going to continue cause it looks like you havent been updating for a while there
well i hope you update cause you cant leave such a good story unfinished :)
well i hope you update cause you cant leave such a good story unfinished :)
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Get on with cht 3 this so far is a prenty good fanfic
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
some very interesting story you have here.don't quit on this one I'd like to know what happens next
you certainly have skills. goodluck !
you certainly have skills. goodluck !
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh.my.god !!!
the storry was hecticated [ if that's even a word]
^__^ it's really good
Chapter was unexpected I had thought that Gun and metal were gonna treat them bad but
it turned out good
Can't wait to read chapter 3
You Rock XD
the storry was hecticated [ if that's even a word]
^__^ it's really good
Chapter was unexpected I had thought that Gun and metal were gonna treat them bad but
it turned out good
Can't wait to read chapter 3
You Rock XD
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gun and Metal are grossly overpowered, but it turned out to be a good read. I can't wait to see chapter 2. Good luck with it...