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for Captured

by Malcore

person BatPwned
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, is this story ever going to be updated?

Choice 1.
person Demi
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Nice. I suppose i will go with three. but hey, why not add some cutting in the play? Maybe im twisted, but razor blades are sexy.
person Sisk
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT! id vote 3, please update
person Captain Planet
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Choice 1. I agree with the guy/girl above. She's with Terra, no one else.
person m
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
option 1 because Raven goes with Terra and not anyone else
person capcomfreak4life
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh hell. you twisted MOTHA-F...*woosh*
the pain, the suffering, the mind-boggling amounts of negative attention she gets in fanfics and you wanna cast a vote for what her twisted fate WILL DELIVER NEXT?!! you're real good, you know that. *repressed anger shows on face*
person Sango
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The ending was awsome! I'm still not quite sure about the whole tara/slade thing, but it makes sense. It was good.
person coolbilly
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Please add more chapters to this story.
person kitsunechibiko
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was totally awesome . write more plz
person m
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice
pleaz continue