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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, we loved this tale and we hope Raven and Terra get together! Please continue!
Love,
Anna and Heather
Love,
Anna and Heather
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..I have to say that was really good. I really hope that you update soon. There's more...hapiness in this story than the first story.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This may sound odd and all, but reading this fic made me just want to break out crying. It's a good piece, and also sad, which I hope is what you were going for. *sniffles a little* I hope you keep un the good work, and update this again sometime soon.
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was a very entertaining chapter. please update soon
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Artemis, please don't tell me you're giving up on this fic. If this is about the lack o newly arising comments it could be that sometimes some people don't like to start stories wiht many chapters.
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh
please update soon
love it so far
hope terra loves raven back when you, i dunno, resurrect her, or whatever
please update soon
love it so far
hope terra loves raven back when you, i dunno, resurrect her, or whatever
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I really like the story. It seems to pull you with it as it goes please continue the story. I say that Hope will not resemeble her mother but most likely will resemeble Terra with a small chance to resemeble Starfire. I hope to see more of your work in the future. signed of fan of Raven.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant say much, im quite speechless. You rule, this is so IC I cant comment on it. Are you sure your not the actual creator of TT? lol
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! No fair! You're still leaving us hanging!!! Cute idea with Hope, though.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Artemis
Like most guys, the idea of Yuri fiction appeals to me for, well pretty much the same reason that catfights, sorority sleepovers and pillow fights do; however aside from that bit of hormonally conceived interest, your work is sleek, entertaining and daring in its technique, your sourcing "Nevermore" in order to extrapolate a 'meeting of the Ravens' is both clever and heartfelt, while I myself tend to preffer the Raven/BB pairing (what can I say, I also like to believe that the goofball can get a hot girl and turn it into a well matched loving couple-maybe that's why I like King of Queens...hmm *ponders*) using "Spellbound" as a refference for Raven's emotional side is also pretty on the money for the profiling of the character, she does get emotional after traumatic events.
While a bit of a surprise, Robin's dialog carried in it the attributes that have always defined his charater as leader of the TTs, you kept him emotionally centered, yet logical and lucid. I am wondering about him sending Raven to Starfire, but it does make sense, after "Switched" they have become better friends and are also more willing to meet each other on the middle.
I hope to read the rest soon.
KuroKen
'Its not about power, but grace. it is not about speed but serenity. it is not about conquering others, but mastering yourself'
The Bulletproof Monk
Like most guys, the idea of Yuri fiction appeals to me for, well pretty much the same reason that catfights, sorority sleepovers and pillow fights do; however aside from that bit of hormonally conceived interest, your work is sleek, entertaining and daring in its technique, your sourcing "Nevermore" in order to extrapolate a 'meeting of the Ravens' is both clever and heartfelt, while I myself tend to preffer the Raven/BB pairing (what can I say, I also like to believe that the goofball can get a hot girl and turn it into a well matched loving couple-maybe that's why I like King of Queens...hmm *ponders*) using "Spellbound" as a refference for Raven's emotional side is also pretty on the money for the profiling of the character, she does get emotional after traumatic events.
While a bit of a surprise, Robin's dialog carried in it the attributes that have always defined his charater as leader of the TTs, you kept him emotionally centered, yet logical and lucid. I am wondering about him sending Raven to Starfire, but it does make sense, after "Switched" they have become better friends and are also more willing to meet each other on the middle.
I hope to read the rest soon.
KuroKen
'Its not about power, but grace. it is not about speed but serenity. it is not about conquering others, but mastering yourself'
The Bulletproof Monk