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I'm afraid I couldn't finish reading this. I know you were wanting to make Starfire the more aggresive one in that she initiates the encounter rather than the more popular Raven initiatives, however, I believe that you took them outside of their normal characteristic boundries way too soon. Starfire was far too headstrong to early and Raven was a little to receptive in joining Starfire. Well, good luck on your next story and finding a good beta tester. You should invest in finding one before you post again.