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by Malcore

person Bishonen
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a good story but one thing you should get a proofreader it would make this a lot better

With Love;Imasuky Lomae
person nat
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story.
person seb
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your writing style strikes me as a bit impersonal. it continuely feels as though I am not really involved in the scene, more like an impartial observer making notes. but practice makes perfect.
person Eric
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are sick fuck
good show
person Eric
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
where the Hell did this come from?
person efvrb
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sucks
person Grim
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ever heard of Spell Check?
person Hollow
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, What the Hell is with you and this diaper fetish? Not that I appose. =P

Anyway, could have used a bit more detail, and less rushed. Sex scences weren't that great, but are improving.

I look forward to more of your stories, and improvement. It's rare that dipaer stories are found. Very unique.
person animeking
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad. Although the pee thing was kinda gross.