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for raven learns focus

by lowteck

schedule July 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Reading this in 2020. This is really good, you should continue it. Wish you're doing well.

person mike
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this is a very very thought out book. And it really wasnt too mushy it was really nice I actually enjoy some forms of romance novels and this one is good so please continue with the 2nd part
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sweet! I have been waiting for a new chapter to this for the longest time. :) looking forward to more.
person Scorpia
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am sooooo happy that you are still working on this fanfic. ^_^
I thought(and feared) it was never to be finished.
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if thats the end you kno fans are gonna hunt you down right. lol but this is a wonderful story i really hope there's more
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Please continue, I really want to see where this story goes. If u need some ideas I'll be glad to help. Again, great GREAT story. One of the best & I've read 'most all of them.
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story great job. I really liked the parts when she goes in his head, and what she learns about him. Chapter 5 was awsome lol.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG please review this is the sweetest developing romance between them. A smut suggestion would be if they used their powered to "aid" eachother for a while.
person mbmbmb
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it plez continue....... and i wont be forced to kill you
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent! I can't wait to see what happens next!!