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for raven learns focus

by lowteck

person Jeff
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We like we like continue, you can't have one without going through their emotions especially when it involves raven. KUTGW
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you end it there then i will beat you, no j/k just continue and i will be happy, KEWL? good
person Shard
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story I'm lovin it and I can't wait for the next one.
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes continue!
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read up to chapter 3. I Have found it very erotic and done in a tasteful yet sentual manner given the scenarios in question.

I do indeed look forward to more on this peice.
BrianDarksoul(Shikima wannabe!)
person sinkore
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea, please continue id like to see where this goes
person Jackdaw
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
person sinkore
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell of a good story so far please write some more
person ???
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great please finish this.(and maybe you could make him a bit more than 8 inches, just a suggestion)
person capcomfreak4life
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will there be more?
tell me there'll be more...