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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome additon, I like how you had Raven build a deeper bond with Beast Boy. Great job on that, I'm also curious as to who that was in the Shaman's memory. I'm looking forward to the answer to that question. For some reason I feel like the person she saw isn't going to be someone that hasn't already been mentioned in the story. Great work, and I hope you update as soon as you can.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update, the bond you had Raven build with Beast Boy was very cool. I'm glad you did something like that. I've always figured Raven would end up building a deep connection with Beast Boy because she's more than just human. But I do want to know who that was in the Shaman's memory, I'm going to guess it was someone we already know (Amos, maybe). I don't know, but I really want to find out.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, you're doing great with this. But I there is one thing I think would be interesting to see. Since their last sexual encounter was more lust than anything else, I think it would be interesting if their next one showed each one's more gentle side, along with their insecurities. Nothing extreme but I still think it'd be more romantic that way.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellence, even the filler is great. Awesome job, and I do agree with Xinothium I think it'd be interesting to see some of their insecurities too. I also think it'd be interesting to see them talk about how what they did at the water tank was both their first time (I'm assuming they were virgins before hand, if they weren't then nevermind). But if it was I'd like to see them talk about it, or atleast comment on it. Just an idea, great story.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An enigmatic tenth chapter.
I will look at this other fic soon....... keep up the hard work
I will look at this other fic soon....... keep up the hard work
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Control is overated, sometimes. Any way loved the chapter, a little short but more than enough to really make you want more. Please update soon. Oh puppy BB was a trip.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do me something real special finish the rest please your killing me here
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story sooooo much. Please continue! It's very different from what I'm used to reading and it's a very pleasent surprise. I can't wait to read what happens next! Update soon and keep up the kick ass work!
-Black
-Black
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for anouther great chapter, I just love the interaction between Rae and BB and the lizard bit. Looking forward to the next one.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, you've updated. Great chapter, I hope you keep it going for a little while longer. Atleast long enough for everything to be cleared up. And I also hope that after you finish this story you make more Teen Titan stories, perferably Raven/Beast Boy ones.