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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job man, I'm loving this story. I hope you update soon, I'm really looking forward to it.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting development for this story so far, the shaman character within beast boy was an interesting touch.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far man, I love it. I hope you have some straight up romance later in the story, I'd love to see some BB/Rae that has a romantic side to it as well as a steamy side. Great job man keep up the awesome work.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it like a maddly fattly baby (dun ask...)
Yes I love your story, it made my day and I really do think you should continue with it. exsactly how you should run with it I can not say... I'm horrible at writting stories and i do not wish to ruin what you started.
Yes I love your story, it made my day and I really do think you should continue with it. exsactly how you should run with it I can not say... I'm horrible at writting stories and i do not wish to ruin what you started.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got 4 words for you... Er, I mean 4 letters, wait, I mean-- Doh! Forget it.. Your story is pretty good. But here's some honest advice. Your story is good and all, but it's lacking Double spacing between paragraphs. My eyes are hurting just to find the spot I left off in your paragraphs.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo nice add on, and I cant wait for the next BBXRae all the Way
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, this is got to be one of my favorite stories and I loved the new chapter and hope you continue. I really don't know where you could take this story, maybe there lives back at the tower after a little more time down under.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was...great. I really think that that is one of the best stories I have ever read. keep it up, I look forward to reading more of your works.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow man, great story. I love this thing. Keep up the great work. Also, I'd like to suggest not having Raven get pregnant. I can understand her getting pregnant later (if the story, or maybe a sequel to it. goes that far in the future.) but not right now. You could have Beast Boy ask her about it or something. And have her say something about preforming a spell on herself to keep it from happening. Like a "birth control spell".
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Time enough for love was a fantastic chapter!! Puts things in perspective and reminds me of a Gundam WIng quote. So cool. Loving your story. Insignificant when compared to a grand scale. So real. so cool.