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for raven learns focus

by lowteck

person ???
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINISH IT >_<
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read the time enough for love chapter. Beautiful indeed Lowtech.
Well I gotta get back to bed as my retina's need sleepy time!

Keep up the good work whenever possible
BrianDarksoul~
person Shadowknight
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. Better than many Raven/BB pairings. Only a few quibbles, but mainly minor grammar/spelling errors. I agree that some paragraph spacing is in order, but again tis just a little thing. Please write beyond ch. 6.
person capcomfreak4life
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! THAT was a good fanfic.
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job, and at the end there, does that mean ur gonna end it 'cause you better not until... well... "things" happen between rae and bb. 'Cause that would make this story complete. Good job, UPDATE SOON, (please?)
person capcomfreak4life
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOOOOOOL
whew, i'm lovin this
person Blaze Waterflower
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey finally made it on to the site and I love the new chapter keep going. Your doing great.
person fat man
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
these stories are great, keep writing them plz!!!!!!!!! also good luck on finals im doing MCAS.......yeah...........i'm 18....sure
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read upto chap 5.
I found this most insightfull and well thought out indeed.
Hehe Man to be in BB's Place damn lucky Bas***d indeed!.

I will wait paitentlly like a good horny maniac(J/K on the Maniac part!)
BrianDarksoul~
person Jackdaw
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers*update soon