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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story it is rly good but I have a small favor would u mind puttin a few spaces between paragraphs? I am not sayin ur story suchs or anything spaces would jus make it easier to read. Plz don't hate me! Love ur story keep it up!
Love Lots,
Fire
Love Lots,
Fire
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you took all the sex out I bet you could send this into cartoon network and actually get it made into an episode JUST my thoughts.....
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the title well suits the story. you're an awesome fanficcer (did i spell that right)
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No you can't stop now keep going!! I'm loving the story! please let me know when the next chapter is up.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter please continue
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dig it. Your formatting needs lots of work and your grammar needs a little help too but you've got a story going here that's drawing me in despite all that. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am so freakin sonfused. It is okay, nothing special. Oh yeah you said something about kim possible. cool i want to read when your done, but i don't know where to go because i found this site a long time ago on google. tell me. Carly Adams- I mean RavenGothGirl>.<
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story! i really hope you make a fourth chapter, im really looking forward to it!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An Enigmatic fourth chapter indeed!
Cyborg and Star sittin i9n a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
Robin and Slade tied in the ditch. all because of an earthmoving BITCH!
Shaman Raven and BB in a threesome Scene. He ain't no Hulk but by god HE is Green Lean and on the scene!
Cyborg and Star sittin i9n a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
Robin and Slade tied in the ditch. all because of an earthmoving BITCH!
Shaman Raven and BB in a threesome Scene. He ain't no Hulk but by god HE is Green Lean and on the scene!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, update soon