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for Demon out for more than blood

by bloodrain01

person Kip
schedule October 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So many typos, I couldn't get into the story. :( 

person Sabbs
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this a lot, I hope you will continue writing. :)
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I once heard an alternate ending to that fable.
"silly little frog I know how to swim"
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story good job. hope you also do the bb/star mate challenge, that would be very unique
person Awenseth
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is so great. Well I hope that Cy and Robin have already made they last wills, then when Beast Boy sees Terra gain then both boys will stand in front of a wery angry half demon whith is wery protective about her mate...That will be such a nice and interesting blood bath...
person LordKain
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I've heard alternate version of the Frog and the Scorpion its exactly like the one you present except at the end the Scorpion says. "Silly little Frog I know how to swim"
person nonengel
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Godd story, this was well written both in the descriptiion of the physical aspects as well as the peeks at Raven and Beast Boy's mental and emotional states. I hope to see this continue on.
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty intresting story with a some good plot to boot
person James
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a very dark and primal feeling story cant wait for more
person Whatever
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. One question who's Eliza?