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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please keep writing, i will check back definately to see more. Congrats, keep up the great work. Sabbs
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter was really well done(that's all that I've read so far)! Even though it's rather short you convey the personalities and speech of the characters as well as their actions. I was also suprised to find that despite it's length, this chapter was not at all rushed. This is very good.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole story from the beginning up to now and I think it's one of the best on here. I really hope you don't scrap it. I'm really looking forward to more. So far this story has been great and I hope you keep writing.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I only want to remark upon your 'scrapping the whole project' idea. Don't you dare, it's awesome.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great story. Appears to be well thought out and is written really well. I hate the short chapters only because they are so good to read!! You are an excellent writer, and you should be proud of what you've got!
Can't wait for an update.
Can't wait for an update.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice dude keep it up i love the story but y the cliffy?
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Long live bb/ray. Love the drama. keep up the good work
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good ! i always love these pairings so good luck with the next chappie!
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww. How cute!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanx this is a great story i jhope ui keep it up plz oh and goo idea over all