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I really didnt like the last chapter, it wasnt mutual at all and seemed rushed. *sigh* Oh well im still going to be checking up on this story anyways.

cool, think u could e-mail me when u update?

lol....now that was a great chap...I've been there before...congrats to BB on holding back when she is practically tellin ya to fuck her brains out. So many chances I've had and still do. Too many to count...but I wouldn't do that it's a real...what's the word...I guess low. Unless both parties are smashed haha.

I really like how this story is turning out.

Finally some BB/Rae smut..haha. Dude, update soon man. I really want to see what happens when Raven wakes...hopefully more of this 'curing of her condition'..lol. Good luck man.

Hehe interesting indeed

Good development. I really like how well paced this is.

Nice pace. No rush and really great development.

Dude that was hot man. I can't wait for it get even more hotter and heavier.

Your story was alright until I got to chapters four and five.

What happened to the width of your text? It looks like you moved the right indent all the way to the right. It is kind of annoying to have to stop reading to move the mouse and scroll to the right to read an entire sentence.

Could you possibly fix this or is this the style in which you will continue to write this? I hope not I would like to continue reading this. I just want to read the story and not have to work to do it. I know that makes me sound lazy but I really am not. Those chapters are just not reader friendly. Epson Salts

Nice. as for Robin and Star... Well, maybe you better expand each pair into a chapter.