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for You're Hypnotic

by WindsofChaos

person Amari
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far and hope to read more soon.
person Sean
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im a big fan of the Bbx Rae pairing cuase it ike Naru x Hina. But to my point. Your writing style is great and i loved the first scene. I hope you continue....ps i loved Snatch...im guessing that is where the cquote came from right...lol

~Dim Song
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good fic so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person KuroKen
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really like the take you have on their relationship, very close to (show) cannon. I find it particulary engaging that Raven's like for BB is not wholly the making of Control Freak's device, more like said device just helped things along.
can't wait to see what follows.

By the way, I see that you are not shy about delving into Robin and Starfire's relationship, are you considering giving them some lemony coverage in this fic?

again and I stress CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT FOLLOWS
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story but one thing that's driving me nuts is your title. Unless you're doing some form of alliteration, it's supposed to be "You're".
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this one, please post more.
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story. waiting for the next part.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness-
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your summary brought me in with an "Ooo! I wonder if they can pull it off." So far, you've done a bit of foreshadowing and some entertaining smut which is always a plus. I will keep my eyes open to see what comes of this one.