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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. Your grasp of the characters are nice and measured. Raven wasn't too dark or too cheerful and Beast Boy didn't come off as annoying or whiny when he opened up to her.
There are some nice plot threads developing and I look forward to reading the rest.
There are some nice plot threads developing and I look forward to reading the rest.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter! update soon!
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An exceptional piece of work among the pulp on this page.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Like this story alot. Update soon