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So cool! I luv this!!

I love your fic! It's very different and keeps you wanting to read more. I hope you update again soon, I would love to see what an angry pissed off Raven will do to Clifford once she has the chance ;)

1. sorry for lack of reviews i read kinda fast and by the time i kno it im past at least 3or more chapthers of a fic.
2. once again your fics have me hooked i can't wait for more your a great writer i just hope u keep writing i plan on reading all your fics as i am now a fan or ur great works

you can't leave us hanging here, Nos. Raven/BB are my fav. pairing you gotta finish this one

OMG WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO GAR?!?!?!?!?!? Alright first i would like to say good job on this fic it is so fun to read. Your characters (i know they arent your but the way you write them) are wonderfully emotionally, and they way their thoughts and emotions are described is a pleasure to read. PLEASE update this soon, i REALLY want to know what happens Gar better be alright, arg i really hate cliff he is so bad it makes you want to jump off one! Raven and Gar really deserve a happy ending (i love this pairing btw). Like i said before fantastic job, keep up the great work and PLEASE update soon!!

Please don't abandon this story!!!! It's a fantastic story line, great writing and it's right at the best part. Please keep writing, at least one more chapter to pull it together (though more would be even better).

The story isn't bad, but you do need to polish the grammar, spelling, and some minor formatting problems. You're putting caps where not needed, and missing the obvious capitalizations that need done. A few missing commas, and a few where they shouldn't be are the other minor extent of problems. Outside of those technical problems, this is not by any means a bad story. My advice would be to find a good beta reader/editor, then have at with more chapters of this decent storyline.

I think i'm in love all over again. This is one of those fics that is so hard to stop thinking about. Please update soon, always remember that if someone gives you a hard time i'll kill them.
Ps: Could you start your own religion, i'd be the first convert.

Sharpens a rusty fork's prongs after reading chapter 6*
Clifford? Hope you have blue cross and had your tetinus shots dude, Cuz i'm jabbing your ass with the Fork of doom mother@#!@@#

*Everyone's eyes widen at the redheaded psycho*

nteresting story so far man. I hope cliff rots in HELL tortured by Raven for all eternity

not quite what i expected from clifford but the fallout from it should be interesting