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by jameswritingfun

person TC
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::evil grin:: I'm not sure which I would like to see more, Raven get ahold of Cliffie, or for Cliffie to get so involved in torturing BB that he forgets to give him the power-nulling shot....
person ubermann
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i believe that cliff will have a encounter with the beast because you can only push a guy so far.

it's good keep it up
person johntheheavy
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this gets more awesome by the minute"-"!
person ubermann
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really now fear for Gar cause if i were cliff i would want his head now neither less before when jelosy was the factor

person voltron-x
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the direction this storys goin towards bb/rae is the best pair keep writin
person Natedog
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a question do you think that Beastboy Aka. Garfeild is related to Wolverine Aka. Logan? Does anybody know Wolverine's first name?
person 1001010101
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job man, I really like this story.
person TheBlueMandue
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you update soon.
person nonengel
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter... i was wondering when we might see more of Raven's fiance... I'm not sure what i'm more interested in... the metting of the titans or what your OC might do.
person ubermann
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i see a big fight a comming and i see gar in the hospital because cliff might jump him and beat him sensless

keep it up