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by jameswritingfun

person nonengel
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far, I've enjoyed the mentions of Raven's emotions
person ubermann
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good will raven pov have the same story like Gars or will it be a different fight that she remembers.
person ubermann
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story it has a certin feel about it that this might be a very good story

person killer200
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finaly, i keep wondering what the fight was about. keep writing.