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for To Be With You

by Comrade

person capcomfreak4life
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the entire english language cannot process the GALAXIES OF HATE that BURN brightly within me of THAT SICKENING WHORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you're too good at this!!!
person Blaze W.
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow your story is going great. Please hurry with the next chapter of it, I can't wait to find out what happen.
person Fidam
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*kills Terra in the most horrifically brutal way concievable* *starts chopping the dead body into many small peices with an axe* DIE YOU CONTROLLING BITCH! DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Very good story, I don't see how anyone couldn't hate Terra with every ounce of thier being after reading this (even Terra/BB lovers such as myself (I usually dont like cliche pairings (such as BB/Raven (but this is one of the rare ones that I enjoy (probably because its a serious relationship between them not 'oh fuck me BB, fuck me now and well never be like this again')) but BB/Terra isn't cliche because even though its expected, its barely writen). So yea, in a nutshell, good story, update soon or I'll do to you what I did to Terra :D (just kidding (or am I)) (I love parenthesis if you can't tell (I over-use them))
person gigafighter
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES TERRA SUX Ass!!!!!!!!!
person hyperfanaddict
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! The latest Chapter, little black book has me on edge. Next chapter please!
person Jerky
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KILL THA BITCH!! KILL HER! KILL HER IN THA MOST PAINFUL WAY POSSIBLE!!
person ???
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Name the kid Jade After that kids born, make it so that they have another one
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read upto chap entitled powerless. Damn things are getting complex. I don't trust that earthmover in any way shape or form. She should of stayed dead Damn bitch!

Anyway your story your rules Ne?

Nice sofar Keep on trucking!
person Amanda
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's very good. ^.^ Keep up the good work.
person Jackdaw
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! update soon