rate_review Reviews

You have done extreamly well in showin tha emotions and characteristics of tha characters. I would like to see a 'tell off' moment later on. That would settle everything but have Terra seekin revenge.. SUPER BITCH!!

BB: Terra! Fuck off! I'm not just going out with Raven; she's my wife!

Terra: WHAT?!

Rae: And.. *places BB's hand on her stomach* We're having a child together..


That'd be sweet.. Do as you wish, it will be great!

5/5!

write more its realy good and i need more keep going its really good you rarely find one as good as this

Please update soon

That blonde bitch needs to get backhanded by Rae's ring! Sense BB's a vampire, let him drain all tha blood from her body. That'd be cool!

As tha Terra problem thickens, it's great to see just how stronge tha bond is between BB and Rae. He did exactly as he should've with Robin; perfect in character! Robin's actions seemed to be just right as well. He tries to be a big, bad leader because of tha frustrations with Batman; perfect in character! And may Terra suffer.

Baby names?
Tha name of a Galic god or goddes. A god or goddes of darkness, night, or tha earth or forest.

the shape-shifter has, been, ticked, OFF!
cool, the plot here is intense, amazing chapter 10.
wonder what's up for 11 & 12

cool see ya later, hey why don't you come check me out on ff.net, I am The Halfa Wannabe

DUDE! YOU GOTTA UPDATE MORE!!! IVE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY FOREVER, AND LONG INCREMENTS BETWEEN CHAPTERS IS EVIL! I COMMAND YOU TO UPDATE MORE OFTEN! ALACAZAM! did it work? please tell me it worked.

DIE BLONDE HOODRAT!! *decapitates her with an anti-ho axe* .....

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XD NECROTIME!!!

*you don't wanna know*

update soon

oooooh yeeeeeaaaaahh i wanna see how this one turns out...
--does this story contain Harry Potter characters?!